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GMAT真题:2010年9月作文(至9.13)(一)

发布时间:2011-12-07 22:12 来源:字号:T|T

  2010.9.1——9.13 GMAT作文机经 AA篇

  AA1

  V1公司说纵然出产跟不上也能增进demand,使其变popular,比及出产跟上了就能成为leader.

  V2说什么Fishborn brewery的,什么要大力大举成长它的national market尽量产量更不上什么的~说产量跟不上会造成供给不敷,反而会使产物需求增大什么

  考古:Fishbone Brewery is a regional small-scaled Brewery that produces a rare and exotic beer. They have hired a consultant who recommended Fishbone to start a national campaign immediately which will lead to high demand for Fishbone beer. Since Fishbone has not yet have the ability to meet excessive demand, those delays in excessive demand will increase the reputation of Fishbone, and thus, pump up the sales. The consultant predicts that within 3 years, Fishbone will become a national leader in beer industry (感激likebeing 提供)

  提要:

  1.对事情的反应时刻诚然是评价处事质量的一个身分但并不是独一的身分.以是仅仅由于东区的贸易救护班的反应时刻短就认定贸易救护办的处事更好是gratuitous的.

  2.就算东区的贸易班的处事质量更好也并不料味着,西区用贸易班就会有一样的成效.由于对象区的环境是差异的.很也许西区的志愿者更有处事,献身意识.

  3.另外除非贸易班收异常昂贵的处事用度可能有异常多的事情事拭魅这些都是不行能的, 改成贸易是不见得就可以给该镇增进许多税收的.以是把这一点作为来由是不正确的.

  1.错误类比 两个都市纷歧样,很也许由于西和东的纷歧样,好比,路的环境traffic condition。也许东的车辆更好。处事的立场更好。并且没有说东的志愿环境怎样,很也许东的志愿比贸易的快。

  2.纰漏的判定:就算是贸易的更快,也不必然更好。反应时刻不是独一的身分,有其他——好比处事的质量,立场,器械等等。

  其它,除非贸易可以charge considerable fees 可能 accident rate很是高,不然未必带来可观的revenue。

  A. In the first place, the arguer ignores other factors that might account for the longer average response time as revealed bu the recent review.

  B. In the second place, the arguer infairly reduces better patient care to shorter response time to accidents.

  C. Finally, the arguer fails to support the claim that hiring a commercial ambulance service would automatically raise revenue for West Cambria.

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